Writing a Script an Avatar Can Deliver
Why a script that reads well produces a video that looks wrong, and how to write for the mouth instead.
What it is for
A script that reads well often looks wrong when an avatar delivers it: long clauses, written-only punctuation and numbers that have to be pronounced. This is how to write for the mouth instead of the page.
The skill
An avatar delivers exactly what is written, with no instinct for breath. Write for delivery, not for the page. - **One idea per sentence, 12–18 words.** Long sentences produce a flat, hurried delivery with no natural pause, and that is what reads as "fake" more than the face does. - **Write out numbers and abbreviations the way they are said.** "twenty twenty-six", "A P I", "dollar sign". A written "2026" or "API" is a coin flip. - **Put a full stop where you want a breath.** Commas do not produce one. - **Never use a parenthesis.** It produces a swallowed, lower-energy clause that looks like a glitch. - **Avoid tongue-twisters and repeated sibilants.** They are the single most common cause of a re-render. Structure the video the same way: - First 5 seconds: what this is about. Not a greeting — a greeting from an avatar is where people leave. - Then one point per 20–30 seconds, each with a visual change (slide, B-roll, framing) at the boundary. An unbroken talking head past 45 seconds loses attention regardless of the script. Read it aloud once at speed before generating. Anything you stumble on, the avatar will too.
How to install it
1. Open the tool and start a new conversation, project or template. 2. Paste the text below wherever the tool keeps standing instructions — usually called system prompt, instructions, or persona. 3. Save it so it applies to every run rather than a single message.